From 7cf4525d2c241b382964ceb8ab7ffa7deeb6b991 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Lukas Winkler <github@lw1.at>
Date: Mon, 7 May 2018 05:54:30 +0200
Subject: fix typos and style issues in GDPR Overview (#12833)

* fix typos and style issues in GDPR Overview

many thanks to https://forum.matomo.org/u/JackZelig

* fix typo

* " then you may not be concerned by the GDPR for Matomo"
---
 plugins/PrivacyManager/templates/gdprOverview.twig | 8 ++++----
 1 file changed, 4 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

(limited to 'plugins/PrivacyManager/templates')

diff --git a/plugins/PrivacyManager/templates/gdprOverview.twig b/plugins/PrivacyManager/templates/gdprOverview.twig
index 899e661799..790b76f1d3 100644
--- a/plugins/PrivacyManager/templates/gdprOverview.twig
+++ b/plugins/PrivacyManager/templates/gdprOverview.twig
@@ -7,9 +7,9 @@
     <div piwik-content-intro>
         <h2>GDPR overview</h2>
         <p>
-            The General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) is a regulation which strengthen and unify data protection for all individuals within the European Union (EU).
+            The General Data Protection Regulation (GDPR) is a regulation which strengthens and unifies data protection for all individuals within the European Union (EU).
 <br /><br />
-            If you take steps to ensure no personal data is collected in Matomo then you may not be concerned by the GDPR (when you track no IP address, no user IDs, no geolocation data, etc.).
+            If you take steps to ensure no personal data is collected in Matomo, then you may not be concerned by the GDPR for Matomo (if you track no IP addresses, no user IDs, no geolocation data, etc.).
 
         </p>
     </div>
@@ -28,8 +28,8 @@
             <li>The right to erasure: <a target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener" href="{{ linkTo({module: 'PrivacyManager', action: 'gdprTools'}) }}">search for a data subject</a> and delete some or all of their data.</li>
             <li>The right to rectification: you can <a target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener" href="{{ linkTo({module: 'PrivacyManager', action: 'gdprTools'}) }}">search for a data subject</a> and delete some or all of their data.</li>
             <li>The right to data portability: <a target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener" href="{{ linkTo({module: 'PrivacyManager', action: 'gdprTools'}) }}">search for a data subject</a> and export all of their data.</li>
-            <li>The right to object: <a target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener" href="{{ linkTo({module: 'PrivacyManager', action: 'usersOptOut'}) }}">let your users easily opt-out</a> in your privacy policy page.</li>
-            <li>If you offer online services to children and relies on consent to collect information about them, then you may need a parent or guardian’s consent in order to process the children’s personal data lawfully.</li>
+            <li>The right to object: <a target="_blank" rel="noreferrer noopener" href="{{ linkTo({module: 'PrivacyManager', action: 'usersOptOut'}) }}">let your users easily opt-out</a> on your privacy policy page.</li>
+            <li>If you offer online services to children and rely on consent to collect information about them, then you may need a parent or guardian’s consent in order to process the children’s personal data lawfully.</li>
         </ol>
     </div>
 
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