fix minor issues

Signed-off-by: Jos Poortvliet <jospoortvliet@gmail.com>

1 files changed, 7 insertions, 6 deletions

diff --git a/page-privacy.php b/page-privacy.php
index 00f7fce7..047ba33b 100644
--- a/page-privacy.php
+++ b/page-privacy.php
@@ -24,7 +24,7 @@
             <p><?php echo $l->t('<strong>Our website</strong> ocasionally embeds content, like YouTube videos (behind a click-through wall) and others. We do not share any of your data with the parties behind them, however, they can gather some information when you watch a video or click the captcha. We are always looking for ways to decrease data sharing here and input is welcome.');?></p>
             <p><?php echo $l->t('<strong>For traking and marketing automation</strong> we use the open source <a class="hyperlink" href="http://matomo.org/">Matomo (the former Piwik)</a> tool to get information on how our website is used and use <a class="hyperlink" href="https://www.phplist.com/">phpList</a> to handle our newsletters. We use the open source marketing automation tool <a class="hyperlink" href="https://mautic.com">Mautic</a> to track business users that did download resources like white papers or participate in webinars <em>and who did opt-in explicitly</em>. From neither will we hand over individual data to anybody else and any privacy breaches we will disclose as soon as possible. We also delete, anonymize and remove data regularly.');?></p>
             <p><?php echo $l->t('<strong>Our <a class="hyperlink" href="https://scan.nextcloud.com">security scanner</a></strong> is strictly based on publicly available information, that is the list of known vulnerabilities relevant for ownCloud/Nextcloud releases as well as any applied hardenings/settings we can scan without having access to the server. We only scan on-demand and store the results for a limited time.');?></p>
-            <p><?php echo $l->t('<strong>Our forums</strong> on <a class="hyperlink" href="https://help.nextcloud.com">help.nextcloud.com</a> runs the open source <a class="hyperlink" href="https://discourse.org">discourse</a> software. This is self-hosted and we do not share, disclose or otherwise distribute any data from it. You can disable your own account there if you need to. Note that this platform is meant for home users and home user questions! As enterprise visitor, please use <a class="hyperlink" href="https://portal.nextcloud.com">our support portal</a>. If you still use the forums, expect that we reach out to you at some point.');?> <?php echo $l->t(' To use our forums you must agree with our Terms of Service. See below for the complete TOS for the use of our forums.');?><a class="hyperlink" href="#TOS">Terms of Service</a></p>
+            <p><?php echo $l->t('<strong>Our forums</strong> on <a class="hyperlink" href="https://help.nextcloud.com">help.nextcloud.com</a> runs the open source <a class="hyperlink" href="https://discourse.org">discourse</a> software. This is self-hosted and we do not share, disclose or otherwise distribute any data from it. You can disable your own account there if you need to. Note that this platform is meant for home users and home user questions! As enterprise visitor, please use <a class="hyperlink" href="https://portal.nextcloud.com">our support portal</a>. If you still use the forums, expect that we reach out to you at some point.');?><?php echo $l->t('To use our forums you must agree with our Terms of Service. See below for the complete TOS for the use of our forums.');?><a class="hyperlink" href="#TOS"><?php echo $l->t('Terms of Service');?></a></p>
             <p><?php echo $l->t('As we <strong>do not host Nextcloud</strong> for anyone else, this privacy policy can not cover what a Nextcloud installation does. In general, we can say the following:');?></p>
             <p><?php echo $l->t('<strong>Our software</strong>, be it the Nextcloud server or the Android or iOS apps, are designed to not sent any user data to us. The optional Usage Survey app can sent usage statistics like installed apps to us to help us improve our service. You can review and approve the data before it is sent. We store the data aggregated and not per user, so a theft of our data can not be used to get any information about any specific installation. The Updater app, if enabled, sends Nextcloud version, PHP version, install time and the channel it wants to the Nextcloud updater server to receive update information. We store the install time and version on the instance to track statistics, all other data is discarded right away.');?></p>
             <p><?php echo $l->t('<strong>With regards to third party apps:</strong> we can not take any responsibility for third-party apps and the data they store or sent about users. We do have a policy in our app store against abusing private data and any app that is found to be in violation is removed and its author banned. However, we do not have the ability to check all code of all third party applications and thus we recommend you are careful when installing third party apps.');?></p>
@@ -56,9 +56,9 @@
                 <li><?php echo $l->t('To follow up with them after correspondence (live chat, email or phone inquiries)');?></li>
             </ul>
             <h3>Podlove</h3>
-            <p>We use the Podlove player to serve podcast on <a href="https://nextcloud.com/podcasts">nextcloud.com/podcasts.</a></p>
+            <p><?php echo $l->t('We use the Podlove player to serve podcast on');?> <a href="https://nextcloud.com/podcasts">nextcloud.com/podcasts.</a></p>
 
-            <p>The <strong>Podlove Web Player</strong> is served by <a href="https://www.keycdn.com">keycdn.com</a> (<a href="https://www.keycdn.com/gdpr">keycdn GDPR statement</a>).</p>
+            <p>The <strong>Podlove Web Player</strong> <?php echo $l->t('is served by');?> <a href="https://www.keycdn.com">keycdn.com</a> (<a href="https://www.keycdn.com/gdpr">keycdn GDPR statement</a>).</p>
 
             <h3><?php echo $l->t('Mautic');?></h3>
             <p><?php echo $l->t('We use the open source <a class="hyperlink" href="https://mautic.org">Mautic marketing automation tool.</a> This is used for actions like emailing a whitepaper to people who entered their email address to receive it. If you enter an email address on our site, you agree with that (otherwise we can not sent you that white paper either). We might sent follow-up emails (like a reminder if you did not download the white paper, or a notification of a new white paper), from which you can opt-out on the bottom of the emails.');?></p>
@@ -130,11 +130,12 @@
                 <li><?php echo $l->t('Keep in mind our forum is to discuss Nextcloud and related, technical issues. Political debates, complaints or such about things not directly related, or purely relevant for yourself, do not belong on the forums. Respect the decisions of administrators - when asked to not discuss things, do not discuss them on the forums.');?></li>
                 <li><?php echo $l->t('To contribute to our forums, you need an account. For that we need a real email address. You can ask us to close your account and delete all private data (but not the posts, see below) any time. Use the contact form on the bottom of this page. Note that YOU are responsible for all actions taken with your account, whether authorized or not, unless you ask us to close your account or notify us it is compromised. You agree to pick a secure password and keep it safe!');?></li>
                 <li><?php echo $l->t('You agree all content posted on the forums is owned by you and by posting on our forums is shared and licensed under the Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International license.');?> <a class="hyperlink" href="http://creativecommons.org/licenses/by-sa/4.0/">Attribution-ShareAlike 4.0 International</a></li>
-                <li><?php echo $l->t('You may not break the law using the forum, use other users accounts, trade, buy or sell user names, advertise any products or use the forums to gather information for advertisement purposes. Also, you man not imply you are affiliated with or endorsed by Nextcloud GmbH or impersonate others.');?></li>
-                <li><?php echo $l->t('You may not automate access to the forum or monitor it with tools like browser plug-ins, web crawlers and the like, unless it is for the purposes of a search engine. You may not circumvent security or access restrictions or try to work around our moderation efforts. Do not strain the forum with tecnical requests or requests designed to impose an unreasonable load on the forum infrastructure.');?></li>
+                <li><?php echo $l->t('You may not break the law using the forum, use other users accounts, trade, buy or sell user names, advertise any products or use the forums to gather information for advertisement purposes. Also, you may not imply you are affiliated with or endorsed by Nextcloud GmbH or impersonate others.');?></li>
+                <li><?php echo $l->t('You may not automate access to the forum or monitor it with tools like browser plug-ins, web crawlers and the like, unless it is for the purposes of a search engine. You may not circumvent security or access restrictions or try to work around our moderation efforts. Do not strain the forum with technical requests or requests designed to impose an unreasonable load on the forum infrastructure.');?></li>
                 <li><?php echo $l->t('Respect copyright and privacy of others: do not remove any copyright marks, do not post copyrighted images and do not share personal details of other people or yourself.');?></li>
             </ul>
-            <p><?php echo $l->t('If you do not wish to follow those rules, please do not use our forums. We reserve the right to change, redact, and delete content on the forum for any reason.');?></p>
+            <p><?php echo $l->t('Note that our forums contain content from our community. While we and our volunteer moderators do our best to keep dangerous or objectionable content off our forums, it is possible users break our rules. This also has privacy implications - if someone hotlinks an image, then the browser of the visitor will fetch the image and transfer the IP adresse (and some other data) to this server. You can configure your browser to not fetch any data from outside the forum, however.');?></p>
+            <p><?php echo $l->t('If you do not wish to follow those rules or accept the above, please do not use our forums. We reserve the right to change, redact, and delete content on the forum for any reason.');?></p>
             <h3><?php echo $l->t('Website source');?></h3>
             <p><?php echo $l->t('The source code of the website can be found in <a class="hyperlink" href="https://github.com/nextcloud/nextcloud.com">our GitHub repository</a>. It is licensed under the <a class="hyperlink" href="https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/GNU_Affero_General_Public_License">AGPLv3 license</a>. Note that graphics and trademarks are of course not licensed freely, nor is text content. The license covers the code of the site.');?></p>