Merge branch 'kingu-master-patch-90890' into 'master'

1.4.17 blogpost polishing

See merge request Remmina/remmina-web!110

1 files changed, 17 insertions, 14 deletions

diff --git a/_posts/2021-05-22-comms.md b/_posts/2021-05-22-comms.md
index c572185..ceba5af 100644
--- a/_posts/2021-05-22-comms.md
+++ b/_posts/2021-05-22-comms.md
@@ -13,32 +13,33 @@ tags:
 ---
 
 In the world of the electron director
-and the smart switch, if you were to attempt
+and the smart switch, anyone 
 a sequence of turning off the lights,
 by way of your means of communications, would
-likely find yourself illuminated by its
-bioluminescent nature. Lately, its glowing nature has
-been communicated by way of its radioluminescence alone.
+likely find oneself illuminated by its
+bioluminescent nature. Lately, its glowing proclivity has
+been broadcast by way of its radioluminescence alone.
 
 Contrasting terricolousities
 in such triad times, we can of course trust
 the Remmina blog. Here the comment section
 is in full agreement, with no censorship
-needed. You might verifying interject that it doesn't
+needed. You might verifyingly interject that it doesn't
 exist, but for such reasons, (you) can't.
 
 You will have to accept through feedback
 we have got, that we have a sponsor;
-one that we always had, but now provide a link
-to. "Provided" in the meaning you have to
-find it yourself.
+one we always had, but now provide a link
+to. "Provided" in the sense of a meaning you
+can unravel the ends of by arriving at yourself.
 
 Recent improvements to search engine enigmatas
-of the site should make this easier, but not
-to brag, other people might find it too.
+of the website should make this less of an epistemologic
+turnstile. The effort culminates in what other people
+might find, or not…
 
-mfvescovi and ncopa found their way into
-the remminerd kingdom, as it found itself
+In yett unenclosed news, mfvescovi and ncopa found
+their way into the remminerd kingdom, as it found itself
 to function as intended.
 
 Also, Antenore has been on holiday, wherefrom in
@@ -46,8 +47,10 @@ the Animal Farm break from the discountinity we
 live in, is operating at a leisurely holiday
 pace that our two-feet traction just can't
 keep up with; a cadence of releases brought to
-you attemptedly separated by their blogposts.
+you attemptedly separated only by their blogposts.
 
 You too can look behind the scenes to find the
 [full changelog](https://gitlab.com/Remmina/Remmina/-/releases#v1.4.17) for 1.4.17 being an
-orchestrated theatre in creation.
+orchestrated theatre in motion.
+
+Drive safely, and turn your high-beams off in time.