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1 files changed, 6 insertions, 9 deletions

diff --git a/index.md b/index.md
index e6a7e6f..1356fa7 100644
--- a/index.md
+++ b/index.md
@@ -1,10 +1,11 @@
 ---
-title: Remote access screen sharing to your desktop
+title: Remote access screen and file sharing to your desktop
 layout: splash
 excerpt: "Remmina — Remote desktop client with RDP, SSH, SPICE, and VNC protocol support."
 intro:
-  - excerpt: "Not only free as in gratis and Open Source, but also copyleft'.\
-  We work on Remmina every day to allow you to work from home or access files remotely."
+  - excerpt: "Work from home or access files remotely.  
+  Not only free as in gratis and Open Source, but also copyleft.  
+  Funded 100% by kind people like yourself."
 feature_row:
   - image_path: /assets/images/screenshots/Remmina_quickhowto.jpg
     image_caption: "[YouTube video](https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5DQ3E-W6z-I)"
@@ -35,13 +36,13 @@ classes:
   - wide
 ---
 
-# Remote desktop client with RDP, SSH, SPICE, and VNC protocol support.
+# Remote desktop client to share screens, input, clipboard, webcams, sound, and files.
 
 {% include feature_row id="intro" type="center" %}
 
 {% include feature_row %}
 
-## Protocol Plugins
+## Remote Access Protocol Plugins
 
 <div id="protocols">
 <ul>
@@ -53,10 +54,6 @@ classes:
 </ul>
 </div>
 
-<hr>
-
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-<hr>
-
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