Spelling and grammar improvements

Thanks to Vincent McIntyre <vincent.mcintyre@csiro.au> for the patch.

1 files changed, 18 insertions, 18 deletions

diff --git a/apt-mirror b/apt-mirror
index 989561c..f565164 100755
--- a/apt-mirror
+++ b/apt-mirror
@@ -16,12 +16,12 @@ A small and efficient tool that lets you mirror a part of or
 the whole Debian GNU/Linux distribution or any other apt sources.
 
 Main features:
- * It uses a config similar to apts F<sources.list>
- * It's fully pool comply
+ * It uses a config similar to APT's F<sources.list>
+ * It's fully pool compliant
  * It supports multithreaded downloading
  * It supports multiple architectures at the same time
  * It can automatically remove unneeded files
- * It works well on overloaded channel to Internet
+ * It works well on an overloaded Internet connection
  * It never produces an inconsistent mirror including while mirroring
  * It works on all POSIX compliant systems with Perl and wget
 
@@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ After you setup the configuration file you may run as root:
 
     # su - apt-mirror -c apt-mirror
 
-Or uncomment line in F</etc/cron.d/apt-mirror> to enable daily mirror updates.
+Or uncomment the line in F</etc/cron.d/apt-mirror> to enable daily mirror updates.
 
 =head1 FILES
 
@@ -52,17 +52,17 @@ F</var/spool/apt-mirror/skel>
         Place for temporarily downloaded indexes
 
 F</var/spool/apt-mirror/var>
-        Log files placed here. URLs and MD5 sums also here.
+        Log files placed here. URLs and MD5 checksums also here.
 
 =head1 CONFIGURATION EXAMPLES
 
 The mirror.list configuration supports many options, the file is well commented explaining each option.
-here are some sample mirror configuration lines showing the various supported ways :
+Here are some sample mirror configuration lines showing the various supported ways:
 
 Normal:
 deb http://example.com/debian stable main contrib non-free
 
-Arch Specific: ( many other arch's are supported )
+Arch Specific: (many other architectures are supported)
 deb-powerpc http://example.com/debian stable main contrib non-free
 
 HTTP and FTP Auth or non-standard port:
@@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ sub find_translation_files_in_release
     }
 }
 
-sub proceed_translation_index
+sub process_translation_index
 {
     # Extract all translation files from the dists/$DIST/$COMPONENT/i18n/Index
     # file. Fall back to parsing dists/$DIST/Release if i18n/Index is not found.
@@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ sub proceed_translation_index
     close STREAM;
 }
 
-print "Proceed tranlation indexes: [";
+print "Processing tranlation indexes: [";
 
 foreach (@config_binaries)
 {
@@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ foreach (@config_binaries)
         my $component;
         foreach $component (@components)
         {
-            proceed_translation_index( $url, $component );
+            process_translation_index( $url, $component );
         }
     }
 }
@@ -592,7 +592,7 @@ foreach ( keys %urls_to_download )
 }
 
 ######################################################################################
-## Main download preparation
+## Main download preparations
 
 %urls_to_download = ();
 
@@ -640,7 +640,7 @@ sub remove_spaces($)
     }
 }
 
-sub proceed_index_gz
+sub process_index_gz
 {
     my $uri   = shift;
     my $index = shift;
@@ -657,7 +657,7 @@ sub proceed_index_gz
 
     unless ( open STREAM, "<$path/$index" )
     {
-        warn("apt-mirror: can't open index in proceed_index_gz");
+        warn("apt-mirror: can't open index in process_index_gz");
         return;
     }
 
@@ -704,7 +704,7 @@ sub proceed_index_gz
     close STREAM;
 }
 
-print "Proceed indexes: [";
+print "Processing indexes: [";
 
 foreach (@config_sources)
 {
@@ -715,12 +715,12 @@ foreach (@config_sources)
         my $component;
         foreach $component (@components)
         {
-            proceed_index_gz( $uri, "/dists/$distribution/$component/source/Sources.gz" );
+            process_index_gz( $uri, "/dists/$distribution/$component/source/Sources.gz" );
         }
     }
     else
     {
-        proceed_index_gz( $uri, "/$distribution/Sources.gz" );
+        process_index_gz( $uri, "/$distribution/Sources.gz" );
     }
 }
 
@@ -733,12 +733,12 @@ foreach (@config_binaries)
         my $component;
         foreach $component (@components)
         {
-            proceed_index_gz( $uri, "/dists/$distribution/$component/binary-$arch/Packages.gz" );
+            process_index_gz( $uri, "/dists/$distribution/$component/binary-$arch/Packages.gz" );
         }
     }
     else
     {
-        proceed_index_gz( $uri, "/$distribution/Packages.gz" );
+        process_index_gz( $uri, "/$distribution/Packages.gz" );
     }
 }