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author | Benjamin Drung <bdrung@debian.org> | 2014-01-31 02:12:56 +0400 |
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committer | Benjamin Drung <bdrung@debian.org> | 2014-01-31 02:12:56 +0400 |
commit | 607f2484f1c32aed35062c3e1327f3601edef326 (patch) | |
tree | 3fb95f2c5c88cced03b33251d15a17f759bcd528 /apt-mirror | |
parent | f7254b8917c1c3b12a77861902a71c9267f13640 (diff) |
Spelling and grammar improvements
Thanks to Vincent McIntyre <vincent.mcintyre@csiro.au> for the patch.
Diffstat (limited to 'apt-mirror')
-rwxr-xr-x | apt-mirror | 36 |
1 files changed, 18 insertions, 18 deletions
@@ -16,12 +16,12 @@ A small and efficient tool that lets you mirror a part of or the whole Debian GNU/Linux distribution or any other apt sources. Main features: - * It uses a config similar to apts F<sources.list> - * It's fully pool comply + * It uses a config similar to APT's F<sources.list> + * It's fully pool compliant * It supports multithreaded downloading * It supports multiple architectures at the same time * It can automatically remove unneeded files - * It works well on overloaded channel to Internet + * It works well on an overloaded Internet connection * It never produces an inconsistent mirror including while mirroring * It works on all POSIX compliant systems with Perl and wget @@ -35,7 +35,7 @@ After you setup the configuration file you may run as root: # su - apt-mirror -c apt-mirror -Or uncomment line in F</etc/cron.d/apt-mirror> to enable daily mirror updates. +Or uncomment the line in F</etc/cron.d/apt-mirror> to enable daily mirror updates. =head1 FILES @@ -52,17 +52,17 @@ F</var/spool/apt-mirror/skel> Place for temporarily downloaded indexes F</var/spool/apt-mirror/var> - Log files placed here. URLs and MD5 sums also here. + Log files placed here. URLs and MD5 checksums also here. =head1 CONFIGURATION EXAMPLES The mirror.list configuration supports many options, the file is well commented explaining each option. -here are some sample mirror configuration lines showing the various supported ways : +Here are some sample mirror configuration lines showing the various supported ways: Normal: deb http://example.com/debian stable main contrib non-free -Arch Specific: ( many other arch's are supported ) +Arch Specific: (many other architectures are supported) deb-powerpc http://example.com/debian stable main contrib non-free HTTP and FTP Auth or non-standard port: @@ -506,7 +506,7 @@ sub find_translation_files_in_release } } -sub proceed_translation_index +sub process_translation_index { # Extract all translation files from the dists/$DIST/$COMPONENT/i18n/Index # file. Fall back to parsing dists/$DIST/Release if i18n/Index is not found. @@ -561,7 +561,7 @@ sub proceed_translation_index close STREAM; } -print "Proceed tranlation indexes: ["; +print "Processing tranlation indexes: ["; foreach (@config_binaries) { @@ -574,7 +574,7 @@ foreach (@config_binaries) my $component; foreach $component (@components) { - proceed_translation_index( $url, $component ); + process_translation_index( $url, $component ); } } } @@ -592,7 +592,7 @@ foreach ( keys %urls_to_download ) } ###################################################################################### -## Main download preparation +## Main download preparations %urls_to_download = (); @@ -640,7 +640,7 @@ sub remove_spaces($) } } -sub proceed_index_gz +sub process_index_gz { my $uri = shift; my $index = shift; @@ -657,7 +657,7 @@ sub proceed_index_gz unless ( open STREAM, "<$path/$index" ) { - warn("apt-mirror: can't open index in proceed_index_gz"); + warn("apt-mirror: can't open index in process_index_gz"); return; } @@ -704,7 +704,7 @@ sub proceed_index_gz close STREAM; } -print "Proceed indexes: ["; +print "Processing indexes: ["; foreach (@config_sources) { @@ -715,12 +715,12 @@ foreach (@config_sources) my $component; foreach $component (@components) { - proceed_index_gz( $uri, "/dists/$distribution/$component/source/Sources.gz" ); + process_index_gz( $uri, "/dists/$distribution/$component/source/Sources.gz" ); } } else { - proceed_index_gz( $uri, "/$distribution/Sources.gz" ); + process_index_gz( $uri, "/$distribution/Sources.gz" ); } } @@ -733,12 +733,12 @@ foreach (@config_binaries) my $component; foreach $component (@components) { - proceed_index_gz( $uri, "/dists/$distribution/$component/binary-$arch/Packages.gz" ); + process_index_gz( $uri, "/dists/$distribution/$component/binary-$arch/Packages.gz" ); } } else { - proceed_index_gz( $uri, "/$distribution/Packages.gz" ); + process_index_gz( $uri, "/$distribution/Packages.gz" ); } } |