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diff --git a/_pages/donations.md b/_pages/donations.md
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--- a/_pages/donations.md
+++ b/_pages/donations.md
@@ -1,7 +1,7 @@
 ---
 title: Make a Donation
 permalink: /donations/
-excerpt: "Thank you for considering making a donation to **Remmina**."
+excerpt: "You have our gratitude in choosing copylefted libre software, donations help **Remmina**."
 layout: single
 classes:
   - landing
@@ -12,31 +12,30 @@ header:
   overlay_filter: rgba(30, 30, 30, 0.8)
   caption: "Image credit: [Antenore Gatta](https://antenore.simbiosi.org)"
 intro:
-  - excerpt: "Your donation means the world to us, and makes the copylefted libre Remmina project better in every aspect. If you have a specific wish you can tell us about it on IRC. Thank you kind and awesome person. Smaller donations are much appreciated, as we all give what we can in accordance with our own resources.
+  - excerpt: "Your donation means the world to us. If you have a specific wish you can tell us about it on IRC. Thank you kind and awesome person.
 "
 author_profile: false
 ---
 
 {% include feature_row id="intro" type="center" %}
 
-## Why donating money to Remmina
+## 100% funded by people like you
 
-The following table resume the recurrent expenses in charge to Antenore and Giovanni
-to build Remmina packages, test Remmina on different operating systems and against different
-remote servers (Windows and Linux VMs) and finally to elaborate the Remmina statistics (from more than 100K volunteers).
+These are the recurring expences paid by Antenore and Giovanni.
 
-| What                                                  | Description                                                                                                      | Yearly cost | Date payed | Next Renew |
+| What                                                  | Description                                                                                                      | Yearly cost | Paid       | Renewal    |
 |-------------------------------------------------------|------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------|-------------|------------|------------|
 | remmina.com (OVH.COM)                                 | domain                                                                                                           | 9.99 EUR    | 15/04/2020 | 15/04/2021 |
 | remmina.org (OVH.COM)                                 | domain                                                                                                           | 12.99 EUR   | 25/03/2020 | 25/03/2021 |
 | remmina.org (OVH.COM)                                 | - Hosting - Performance1 - 12 months.<br>- 1000 pops, 1000 mailing lists.<br>- CDN - 3 POPs                      | 119.88 EUR  | 24/10/2019 | 23/10/2020 |
 | remmina.org (OVH.COM)                                 | zone DNS                                                                                                         | 1.00 EUR    | 25/03/2020 | 25/03/2021 |
-| Computing environment (owned by giox069 and antenore) | 2 Intel servers and 1 pi4 are used to build remmina packages, tests different OS configurations and other tasks. | 180.00 EUR  |            |            |
+| Computing environment (self-owned) | 2 Intel servers and 1 pi4 are used to build Remmina packages, test different OS configurations and other tasks.                     | 180.00 EUR  |            |            |
 | Total                                                 |                                                                                                                  | 323.86 EUR  |            |            |
 
-Add to this the huge amount of hours spent debugging reported bugs and implementing new features, preparing for a new release and such.
+Honest hard work goes into building Remmina packages, testing Remmina on different operating systems and against different
+remote servers (Linux and Windows VMs), managing translations, elaborating opt-in statistics, debugging reported bugs, helping users, implementing new features, and preparing new releases.
 
-Having a stable revenue would be beneficial to do some investment to cut down the time spent in some tasks and used to actually focus in what is most demanded.
+We are so grateful for the increased donations, and any stability helps focus on what is most demanded.
 
 ## <i class="fa fa-bitcoin"></i> bitcoin
 
@@ -61,7 +60,7 @@ Bitcoin is a libre project that avoids the bank middleman.
 
 ## <i class="fa fa-github"></i> GitHub Sponsors
 
-GitHub sponsors is operated by monopoly abuser Microsoft. There are different tiers for which you will receive benefits.
+GitHub sponsors is operated by monopoly abuser Microsoft, but they do match donations. There are different tiers for which you will receive benefits.
 If the different tiers available don't suit your wishes, let us know.
 
  [GitHub sponsor page](https://github.com/sponsors/antenore)
@@ -244,10 +243,12 @@ These donors have contributed a great amount of money
 
 ## Disclaimer
 
-The Remmina project is not a nonprofit organization. The money you donate, goes to one of the Remmina maintainers (rotating yearly).
+The Remmina project is not a nonprofit organization. Revenue streams go towards development as directly as possible.
+This avoids the biggest libre software 501(c)(6) fiscal host dictating  which revenue streams can be utilized and saves 5% from the net revenue.
+The money you donate, goes to one of the Remmina maintainers (rotating yearly).
 For amounts above 200$, get in contact with us.
 Thank you so much for your support!
 
 Exact amounts are not disclosed for privacy, except if requested.
-Ask at any time how donations are used.
+Ask at any time how your donation is used. Remmina is fully transparent, and is helped by hiding nothing.
 If you want to be removed, or you are not listed, or you want more details about you added, let us know.