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diff --git a/_posts/2019-07-30-remmina-ice-pop-release.md b/_posts/2019-07-30-remmina-ice-pop-release.md
index e9af742..b957744 100644
--- a/_posts/2019-07-30-remmina-ice-pop-release.md
+++ b/_posts/2019-07-30-remmina-ice-pop-release.md
@@ -13,24 +13,24 @@ tags:
 
 {% include figure image_path="/assets/images/frozen-fruit-stock-photo.jpg" alt="See larger image" caption="A fresh Ice Pop" %}
 
-Pretty warm, isn't it? You want some popsicle?
+Pretty warm, isn't it?
 
-Well we cannot bring to you that kind of freshness, but we still got something cool for you.
+The fresh release. 1.3.5
 
-As [previously announced](/we-got-news-and-more/), Remmina v1.3.5 is ready to be installed and we are bringing to you many new features.
+As [previously announced](/we-got-news-and-more/), along with many new features.
 
-- Configurable, human readable profile file names by Antenore Gatta
+- Configurable, human readable profile filenames by Antenore Gatta
 
-    Which means you can save your profiles where you want and with an easier way to identify the file name.
+    Save your profiles where you want and with an easier way to identify the filename.
 
-- A KDE Wallet plugin, that can be used instead of the GNOME Keyring by Giovanni Panozzo.
+- A KWallet plugin, which can be used instead of the GNOME Keyring, by Giovanni Panozzo.
 
-    The KDE Wallet will be activated automatically if Remmina has been compiled with `-DWITH_KF5WALLET=ON`, KDE Wallet is installed and running.
-    Be aware that we haven't developed a mean to migrate passwords from one wallet to the other.
+    KWallet will be activated automatically if Remmina has been compiled with `-DWITH_KF5WALLET=ON`, KWallet is installed and running.
+    Be aware there are no means of migrating passwords from one wallet to the other included.
 
 - Many notable and subtle bugs fixed by Giovanni Panozzo.
 
-    Null pointer reference, RDP issues, remmina connection window fixes and refactoring and many more!!
+    Null pointer reference, RDP issues, Remmina connection window fixes and refactoring and other things.
 
 - Remmina news (and announcements) widget by Antenore Gatta.
 
@@ -42,13 +42,11 @@ As [previously announced](/we-got-news-and-more/), Remmina v1.3.5 is ready to be
 
 - WWW plugin (web browser with authentication for Remmina) by Antenore Gatta.
 
-    This is a replacement of the external plugin Remmina WebKit. The big advantage over it, it's that you can save username and password. In the future will add support for webdriver/selenium and company.
+    This is a replacement of the external WebKit Remmina plugin. You can save your username and password. In the future support for webdriver/selenium and company will be added.
 
 - New color schemes for the SSH plugin.
 - Preferences cleaning by Antenore Gatta
-- Profile saving bug fixed by Antenore Gatta.
+- Profile saving bug, fixed by Antenore Gatta.
 - Remmina main UI improvements by Antenore Gatta.
 - Typographic and wording corrections by Davy Defaud.
-- flatpak updates to use latest libs (for a better experience) by Denis Ollier.
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+- Flatpak updates to use latest libs (for a better experience) by Denis Ollier.